i love her pose and the background too! it all makes a complete picture! ^^ i can see the details that you made using gold ink pen! very nice! ^^

critique??? um... not good at knit-picking lol!
erm... i guess the shade of the lilies would be good if you use a yellowish or dull-cyan tints... to make the flowers more "alive" grey shadows made them look artificial... but that's just me... ehehehe...
and make the marbled pieces more shiney ^^ oh! and use a bit of white on the accents on the chandelier... silver pen can't stand alone and maybe dull when scanned ^^

aside from those minor details this is quite lovely over-all! > w < i like it since its a complete picture! and the pose looks so natural! i seldom use BG on my works so i really envy you~ ; w ;

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Thanks for the critique..I'm running out of coloring ideas kasi eh I was going to buy white gel pen sa Office warehouse but it's out of stock >0<

Thanks again, master buta-chan.
I want to draw and color more with background for a change~ DX

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Chibiness

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The reasonable man adapts himself to the world. The unreasonable one persists in trying to adapt the world to himself. Therefore all progress depends on the unreasonable. - G. B. Shaw

Thank goodness I'm unreasonable - C-T

you can do it darky~! i believe in you~!!!

and kahit ako nauubusan na rin ng idaes ^^ pero you're doing well! everyone has room for improvements so just keep it up! lol! XDDD

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indeed

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Thanks! I know i can do it-I need to practice even more kahit na sinasabi ng iba na i improved talaga..XDDD

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ah~! in that part, i definitely agree~! ^^ you have improved a lot! > w < and that's the spirit!!! keep it up! 0 w 0

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kickass clubs! click away, folks!
~the-endless-club ~goldensaucer ~iskolar

Osu! I will yah!! motivated na naman ako mag-improve ng skills ko

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Are u Teal'c obsessed?

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The reasonable man adapts himself to the world. The unreasonable one persists in trying to adapt the world to himself. Therefore all progress depends on the unreasonable. - G. B. Shaw

Thank goodness I'm unreasonable - C-T